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Setepsutekh
Acolyte
United Kingdom
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 Posted - 22 Jun 2005 : 03:58:54
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I've written a small article on the Greater Mummy for the encyclopedia site and I thought I'd let you know and I'd like to see your opinions on it, bear in mind that this is the first piece of real writing that I've done in ages so it may not be like reading Shakespeare  .
Article in question:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Greater_Mummy
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"And so the creature was imprisoned and his tomb cast out into the desert, never would the Scourge of the Sands threaten the lands of Mulhorand...(the rest is worn away)
- Ancient hieroglyphics found amid the ruins of the Raurin Desert
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Kentinal
Great Reader
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Posted - 22 Jun 2005 : 04:13:30
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| A nice first effort. |
"Small beings can have small wisdom," the dragon said. "And small wise beings are better than small fools. Listen: Wisdom is caring for afterwards."
"Caring for afterwards ...? Ker repeated this without understanding.
"After action, afterwards," the dragon said. "Choose the afterwards first, then the action. Fools choose action first."
"Judgement" copyright 2003 by Elizabeth Moon |
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The Sage
Procrastinator Most High
Australia
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Posted - 22 Jun 2005 : 06:09:01
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Indeed. I often add to the many of the PS and DL articles on Wikipedia, as well as some of real-life mythology entries -- mostly relating to Egyptian, Babylonian, and Chinese beliefs.
Do you plan to cover any other 'undead' aspects?
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Setepsutekh
Acolyte
United Kingdom
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Posted - 22 Jun 2005 : 17:22:16
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| Yes I may cover other D&D undead not featured as yet, I'll wait and see on that. Thanks to any of you who praise that piece, and if you think it could have been better or have any other opinion feel free to air it. |
"And so the creature was imprisoned and his tomb cast out into the desert, never would the Scourge of the Sands threaten the lands of Mulhorand...(the rest is worn away)
- Ancient hieroglyphics found amid the ruins of the Raurin Desert
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Thureen Buroch
Learned Scribe
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Posted - 02 Jul 2005 : 15:41:52
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It's great! I knew about Wikipedia, but I didn't know that anybody could write an article for it! But your entry is really nice. I don't play 3.5E, I play 3E, and I though that the Mummy Lord was just an advanced mummy with a template added to it. I didn't realize that it had a whole background!  It's great that you could fill us 3E players in on stuff like that. |
Goblins? *Slash* *Scream* *Thunk* What goblins? |
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Shadovar
Senior Scribe
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Posted - 03 Jul 2005 : 03:12:43
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| Indeed it is an impressive article. |
We have fostered trust, recruited loyalty, and gathered the faithful. We have trained thousands. Our legions can cover the land, fill the sky and travel through the darkness. We can hunt any and all that would deny our heritage. Now is our time, now is the time of the Dark Reign(Rain) of the Empire of Shadows.
- High Prince Telemont Tanthul, Lord Shadow
In a speech given to the citizens of Shade Enclave
At the celebration of the Shinantra Battle victory when he revealed that he was THE Lord Shadow of legend. |
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Faramicos
Senior Scribe
Denmark
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Posted - 01 Aug 2005 : 17:00:41
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| An impressive piece of writing. Good job. Clarifies the subject in perfect detail. |
"When dragons make war, worlds can only tremble in the shadow of angry wings" |
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